Post by Silver on Jan 27, 2008 15:39:03 GMT -8
Name: Cinderstar
Age: 48 moons
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Leader
Clan: Mistclan
Apprentice/Mentor: N/A
Appearance: Cinderstar has short, smokey gray fur. Her piercing narrow blue/grey eyes are thoughtful, and seem endless when she is in deep thought. Her ears are large, and are very acute. Cinderstar is a tall cat, usually towering over her Clanmates. Her tail is very long, and is often found wrapped around her largish paws.
Voice: Its is not loud, but not soft. Very commanding and prideful.
Battle: Cinderstar is very swift and agile, easily dodging attacks. She enjoys taunting her opponent, and attempts to confuse them. Though an excellent fighter, she usually doesn't look behind her for an unseen enemy.
Personality: Cinderstar is very kind and loving. Many call her a motherly figure, although she never had a mate. She loves when things run smoothly, and is often found talking to her deputy about the Clan, or warriors about apprentice's progress. When her rare temper gets lose, she is not to be crossed. Her sharp words and vicious temper often make whoever upset running tail between their legs. She is confident in her choices, and often is calm and cool.
History: Cinderstar's mother Bluewind was a respected Mistclan cat. Bluewind and Willowears, her mate, were close to senior warriors when Cinderstar was born. Her brother Yarrowkit, unfortunately, did not survive the first 48 hours, and Tawnytail was born a healthy kit. She was a playful kit, and a mischievous one. She and her sister often caused trouble together, but they grew out of their mischievous habits when they were apprenticed.
Her father, Willowears, mentored Cinderstar himself. He often took her on early morning patrols, battle training, and hunting. She was a quick and skilled, and helped Tawnytail when she was struggling in battle skills. She quickly became a favorite of the warriors, and a good friend among the apprentices. Cinderstar and Tawnytail were made warriors together, at the age of 9 moons.
Ciderstar's warrior name was Cinderpelt. She and her sister were very close, often hunting or patrolling together. They gave each other lots of advise, and were found fighting side by side during a border battle. Their father and mother had retired some time earlier, and everyone was shocked at Bluewind's early death. Cinderstar grieved greatly with her family. About 2 moons after Bluewind's death, another misfortune occurred. Tawnytail was chasing a rouge across the border when she raced across a thunderpath, and was hit by a twoleg monster. Cinderstar was distrought at losing her sister, and her best friend. She kept mostly to herself for a while, until she was made deputy. The leader died about 7 moons after she was made deputy, their leader lost their last life fighting greencough. Cinderstar was then made the proud leader of Mistclan. Her father is lucky to be alive today, watching his daughter lead Mistclan.
Family:
Mother;Bluewind;StarClan
Father;Willowears;Elder
Sister;Tawnytail;StarClan
Brother;Yarrowkit;StarClan
SW: Cinderpelt awoke to the first rays of dawn. At first, she thought something was out of place, until she realized there was no warm body beside her. Tawnytail has been dead for moons. You have to get over it she scolded herself, feeling the burn of loss she had felt everyday since her beloved sister had died. She dragged herself from bed, streching and yawning as she avoided sleeping on her fellow Clan mates. Outside, the dawn patrol was preparing to leave, while their leader was sitting on the high rock, watching his Clan. Every thing was so peaceful, what happened next was a great surprise. "Redfoot is dead!" the shriek split the air, as a scraggled apprentice bolted through the entrance. Leafstar, their current leader, leaped down from his perched and hurried to the apprentice. Redfoot is dead? she could almost hear the question being echoed around camp as many poked their heads out of the den's, wakened by the commotion. Cinderpelt was glued to her spot, froze in shock. After a short chat with the apprentice, Leafstar leaped to the top of the rock, and called a Clan meeting. "Redfoot is dead," he announced, the Clan silent below him. "I will pick a new deputy by moonrise,and a burial ceremony will be held at sun high" and with that, he jumped down from his spot, letting the Clan absorb this information.
Late that night, the Clan gathered, anxious for news of the new deputy. After what seemed like a whole leaf-bare, Leafstar called the Clan meeting. "May StarClan approve of my choice," he said, his eyes scanning the Clan below him. "The new deputy is Cinderpelt"
Other: Hope you don't mind me using a fake leader and deputy for my SW