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Post by Torn on May 24, 2008 11:24:53 GMT -8
Sorry if this isn't finished and you still have more to write, but I think you need to write a bit more about his voice and some more in the SW. Good otherwise!
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Post by ♫ E§he ♥ on May 26, 2008 19:42:50 GMT -8
Accepto
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